Ahhhh, yes! The story is coming together nicely. Although there's an ocassional spelling mistake or so, it is still a wonderful story. Kinda reminds me of a creepypasta, but with chapters! The story describes characters and actions breathtakingly well. I'm excited to reading more. The story was way worth the wait! I hope it will have more plot twists and surprises in store! The story uses imagery to it's advantage. I'd love to just snuggle up with a cup of tea and a comfy blanket and just read. I reccomend it for any creepypasta or Steven Universe fans. Keep up the good work!
~Thunder